Photos and Critiques

We had a critiquing session with our groups and collab supervisor Taarati. Having the critiques was good because it allowed us to know what the 'viewer' actually thought of the work and if our intentions were being known without us having to explain what the work was about.

The feed back that we got from the critique, were that the images were good and had a focal point (2 out of 3 of them did, although these were just draft photos). Although the photos were good, the link between the photos was not obvious. Adding text was suggested to help the viewer understand what the series of works were about and how they connect to one another. 
It was very helpful getting critiqued, because we know now to link the photos to give the viewer a narrative of what the works are about. 

Need to now research artist that use text in there photographs.